This week I looked explored Mrs, Katy Cassidy's technology programs she uses in her class. Mrs. Cassidy is a 1st grade teacher who has her own website that has different programs teachers can use in their classroom. In her interview with Dr. Strange, Mrs. Cassidy states that "ever teacher should be technology literate because technology is constantly changing", students are becoming more and more inclined to use technology. I will be implementing both a blog and a website for use by myself, the students, and the parents. With a blog and website, teachers will be able to receive feedback on their child's progress and see where in the lesson plan we are for the week as well as be able to tell what mandatory assignments their child should be doing and be able to ask me questions easily.
In the first sentence you put "looked explored Mrs, Cassidy's technology…" obviously I think you just made an error by putting both looked and explored. But you also put a comma after Mrs. instead of a period. In the second sentence you wrote ever and I think you meant to write every. I also think you could have written just a little more about the things Mrs. Cassidy does with technology in her classroom. But other than that and a few punctuation errors it was a good post!
ReplyDeleteThis was very brief, don't you think? Also, where are your links to the videos? And please be sure to proofread before you publish!
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